<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395</id><updated>2011-12-21T15:48:23.260-08:00</updated><title type='text'>DEEP CRITIQUE</title><subtitle type='html'>A&lt;br&gt;
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I dance for you within the warm room, pounding lust the only music. Music enough for bare feet on pine ...wood floor to recognize movement, to invent a stomp, yield a slide. Wall after wall passing as I whirl. Easy to lift my red summer skirt for you, easy to feel beautiful, tan thighs a trophy to bestow. Skirt bunched in fingers, easy to tease up inch by inch, up and even higher, the only step left raising the soft fabric over my head. Easy to drop the rippled fabric like something molten at my ankles, leaving me wilder. Unfinished. Lace panties remain. Sheer blouse clinging to shoulders. Lace bra cupping breasts. My dance spinning forward. You shift, closing in. Whisking my white blouse high and off. Chests almost flesh to flesh, small bits of light cloth still playing coy. Our arms touching high, flexing, and high. I catch the scent of you. You moving easily with me. Circling. Mouths open to each other. Breathing for each other. Your last bit of clothing, my last bit of clothing--undone. Gone. Still in circles, spinning until we drop to the floor. You grabbing my skirt; a pillow for my head. Me, wet, lifting open for you. Your hard curve ready to slide in and deep. And deep. Still a dance. Easy to learn this newly joined pace and tempo. Fused, plunging, pushing, dancing. The fog at the window now a heavy drape. Our bodies, our throats, music enough. Music enough.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-3858526480807980234?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/3858526480807980234/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2011/02/sharon-lynne-thompson-red-swirl-beach.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/3858526480807980234'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/3858526480807980234'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2011/02/sharon-lynne-thompson-red-swirl-beach.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-2034095418601555424</id><published>2011-02-05T08:10:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2011-02-05T08:10:43.275-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Lori Wall-Holloway&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SHATTER&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I rearrange heirlooms inside a hutch &lt;br /&gt;so their beauty can be seen through the glass –&lt;br /&gt;Clear crystal, bone china teacups &lt;br /&gt;with flowers painted on them&lt;br /&gt;along with antique plates passed &lt;br /&gt;down through the generations.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Over and over I arrange the items, much &lt;br /&gt;like how I attempt to organize my life.&lt;br /&gt;So it looks perfect. So it looks just right…&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Periodically, thoughts clutter my head &lt;br /&gt;with where I failed and made mistakes. &lt;br /&gt;A feeling of rejection appears from &lt;br /&gt;deep in the recesses of my brain&lt;br /&gt;as I replay a moment with a person&lt;br /&gt;that kicks off a memory of the past.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A tape plays inside my mind &lt;br /&gt;that binds me -&lt;br /&gt;“I can’t be perfect if I’m a failure.”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Instead of moving forward,&lt;br /&gt;I procrastinate. I’m on the fence.&lt;br /&gt;Why risk anymore rejection?&lt;br /&gt;Why reach out to another again?&lt;br /&gt;Fear locks me in.&lt;br /&gt;Giving up altogether &lt;br /&gt;seems like a better choice.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yes, I’ll just give up until –&lt;br /&gt;SHATTER!!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A realization dawns as my&lt;br /&gt;heart and mind are challenged&lt;br /&gt;with false beliefs of myself &lt;br /&gt;versus what is real.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Who am I really?&lt;br /&gt;Not what you want me to be.&lt;br /&gt;I don’t need to be perfect&lt;br /&gt;for your validation.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The One who created me&lt;br /&gt;will still love and value me,&lt;br /&gt;even when I make mistakes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I take a deep breath &lt;br /&gt;And repeat to myself –&lt;br /&gt;“Let my good be good enough,”&lt;br /&gt;as I straighten a picture&lt;br /&gt;on a crooked wall.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-2034095418601555424?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/2034095418601555424/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2011/02/lori-wall-holloway-shatter-i-rearrange.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/2034095418601555424'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/2034095418601555424'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2011/02/lori-wall-holloway-shatter-i-rearrange.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-6048257275284614877</id><published>2010-11-27T04:06:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2010-11-27T04:07:22.167-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Lori Wall-Holloway&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SPOOK&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;(For Jenny)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I look with pride in the mirror at my &lt;br /&gt;creation. Wearing a long, flowing black &lt;br /&gt;dress with red bloodlike paint splattered on it,&lt;br /&gt;I smile at my ghoulish make-up that sets &lt;br /&gt;it off.  I am now all set to depart&lt;br /&gt;to my assignment, much to Mom’s chagrin –&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In a makeshift building, I climb up and &lt;br /&gt;down rafters, striking fear into those who&lt;br /&gt;dare to enter.  By jumping either in&lt;br /&gt;front or in back of a patron, I cause &lt;br /&gt;fear. My element of surprise makes me &lt;br /&gt;one of the best spooks of the group. Although, &lt;br /&gt;I may take it easy on the little &lt;br /&gt;kids, I enjoy the challenge to make the &lt;br /&gt;big jocks scream or run from me to the next &lt;br /&gt;section. This is especially if I &lt;br /&gt;hear the jocks brag how nothing will scare them.&lt;br /&gt;Ha, ha, ha – I am hailed as the best spook&lt;br /&gt;who draws the crowd. Night after night I play&lt;br /&gt;the part. I get daring, enjoying my &lt;br /&gt;role until – Oh no! My foot slips and I&lt;br /&gt;find myself falling, falling and then BAM!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The cushions I fall on do not break my &lt;br /&gt;fall very well.  I’m shaking and in pain.&lt;br /&gt;I feel someone quickly help me up to &lt;br /&gt;get away so the action can resume.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I suppose this ends my stint as the best&lt;br /&gt;spook the Boy Scouts had in their Haunted House.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-6048257275284614877?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/6048257275284614877/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2010/11/lori-wall-holloway-spook-for-jenny-i.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6048257275284614877'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6048257275284614877'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2010/11/lori-wall-holloway-spook-for-jenny-i.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-1843107708222909573</id><published>2010-05-18T10:52:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2010-07-03T21:13:01.331-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Don Kingfisher Campbell&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FILM&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;eyes open&lt;br /&gt;slide out of bed&lt;br /&gt;shuffle to the bathroom&lt;br /&gt;like The Mummy&lt;br /&gt;can barely see&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;shower, dress&lt;br /&gt;throw on a jacket&lt;br /&gt;hop in car&lt;br /&gt;like Robert Mitchum&lt;br /&gt;flying to his Angel Face&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a woman&lt;br /&gt;Out Of The Past&lt;br /&gt;looking as lovely&lt;br /&gt;as ever as if&lt;br /&gt;Jane Greer still lives&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ride together&lt;br /&gt;to the beach, stroll&lt;br /&gt;stop to gaze at littered shore&lt;br /&gt;like Charlton Heston and his mate&lt;br /&gt;on The Planet Of The Apes&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-1843107708222909573?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/1843107708222909573/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2010/05/film-eyes-open-slide-out-of-bed-shuffle.html#comment-form' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/1843107708222909573'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/1843107708222909573'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2010/05/film-eyes-open-slide-out-of-bed-shuffle.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4708590681144731572</id><published>2009-11-18T18:06:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-11-18T18:07:06.091-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Eileen Martinez&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;UNTITLED&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Life is what it’s meant to be I say,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We emerge from the womb of our dear mothers&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Put out and tested in this world of dreams&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To make our way and try to survive the realities of what we awake to each day&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Trying to catch a glimpse of the sunrises, the sunsets and all the creations that were made for us to value&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Do we value them, do we value ourselves I say,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We make up our lives as we go along and we are to blame for whatever we encounter&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There are no promises of the day, of tomorrow, of the future&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Cherish and value what is present and offered to you&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And abolish all things unnecessary and enjoy the gift of your life.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-4708590681144731572?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/4708590681144731572/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/11/eileen-martinez-untitled-life-is-what.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4708590681144731572'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4708590681144731572'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/11/eileen-martinez-untitled-life-is-what.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4559151670187158055</id><published>2009-11-12T19:00:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-11-19T21:33:13.675-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Lori Wall-Holloway&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;WIND THROUGH THE EYES OF A TWO YEAR OLD&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;(For Robert)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Puffs of air blow &lt;br /&gt;on my face,&lt;br /&gt;my arms&lt;br /&gt;and my legs,&lt;br /&gt;but I still want to stay&lt;br /&gt;outside and play.&lt;br /&gt;The puffs get &lt;br /&gt;stronger and stronger,&lt;br /&gt;until suddenly the trees &lt;br /&gt;become giant monsters&lt;br /&gt;waving their huge tree arms.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Afraid, I run into the house &lt;br /&gt;with the wind chasing me, &lt;br /&gt;pushing me from behind.&lt;br /&gt;A loud sound makes me stop&lt;br /&gt;and turn in the doorway.&lt;br /&gt;The monsters are shaking&lt;br /&gt;their large green hands&lt;br /&gt;at each other and look &lt;br /&gt;like they’re fighting.&lt;br /&gt;They make loud noises, &lt;br /&gt;and their big brown bodies&lt;br /&gt;bend so far to the ground,&lt;br /&gt;they look like they will break.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I hurry inside and slam &lt;br /&gt;the door against the wind&lt;br /&gt;so I can watch the fight&lt;br /&gt;from the window.&lt;br /&gt;The monster trees scare me.&lt;br /&gt;They can’t get me inside the house.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-4559151670187158055?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/4559151670187158055/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/11/lori-wall-holloway-wind-through-eyes-of.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4559151670187158055'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4559151670187158055'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/11/lori-wall-holloway-wind-through-eyes-of.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-2591764328554120072</id><published>2009-09-27T08:17:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-09-27T08:18:14.467-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Lori Wall-Holloway&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;WORD DANCE&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Lord, please let my words&lt;br /&gt;dance off the tip of my tongue&lt;br /&gt;and leap across the ears&lt;br /&gt;of my listeners, as I speak.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Let the music of my idioms&lt;br /&gt;skip over the stage of the psyche&lt;br /&gt;while phrases chassé each other&lt;br /&gt;and do pirouettes in the imagination.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ending with an arabesque pose&lt;br /&gt;before the final bow, I pray&lt;br /&gt;my words grace the listeners’&lt;br /&gt;minds with beauty.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-2591764328554120072?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/2591764328554120072/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/09/lori-wall-holloway-word-dance-lord.html#comment-form' title='6 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/2591764328554120072'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/2591764328554120072'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/09/lori-wall-holloway-word-dance-lord.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>6</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-7834769808609604045</id><published>2009-09-24T00:10:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-09-24T00:11:02.470-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>CaLokie&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;GOD-IN-THE-BOX&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Turn on tap&lt;br /&gt;Pour oceans, seas, lakes, rivers, etc.&lt;br /&gt;into plastic bottles&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;With scissors cut out continents&lt;br /&gt;Fold and put into envelopes &lt;br /&gt;Moist glue and seal letters&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Collect planets&lt;br /&gt;Paste on 3x5 blank cards&lt;br /&gt;Paperclip together&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Gather Milky Way stars&lt;br /&gt;Staple to 8x10 college ruled notebook sheets&lt;br /&gt;Leave every other line blank&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Use rubber bands to connect remaining &lt;br /&gt;galaxies to each other &lt;br /&gt;Then bind together with super strings&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Try to get all items in one box to save shipping costs&lt;br /&gt;Wad newspapers and stuff between plastic bottles &lt;br /&gt;and materials stapled or paper clipped &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wrap and duct tape brown paper on box&lt;br /&gt;On top, bottom and sides stamp&lt;br /&gt;“HANDLE WITH CARE”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Call Fed-Ex&lt;br /&gt;Return contents to manufacturer for needed repairs&lt;br /&gt;before warranty expires&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-7834769808609604045?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/7834769808609604045/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/09/calokie-god-in-box-turn-on-tap-pour.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7834769808609604045'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7834769808609604045'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/09/calokie-god-in-box-turn-on-tap-pour.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-5316466811229260150</id><published>2009-08-22T22:45:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-08-22T22:47:55.250-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Michelle Angelini &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SHE: EXPRESSIONAL EXHIBITION&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;does things according to self-desires&lt;br /&gt;moves furniture before eating breakfast&lt;br /&gt;leaves dishes to wash until the next morning&lt;br /&gt;has no one to order (or at least mostly so)&lt;br /&gt;what is allowed in her private space&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;once she heard a poet perform&lt;br /&gt;her work in third person singular&lt;br /&gt;a style that makes this author comfortable&lt;br /&gt;now courage to compose poems &lt;br /&gt;in this voice arises moves forward&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;is a child of the planet identifying &lt;br /&gt;with all its elements &lt;br /&gt;fire in her heart&lt;br /&gt;air beneath her wings&lt;br /&gt;earth in her heart&lt;br /&gt;water-flowed words&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;befriends animals &lt;br /&gt;tells them secret desires&lt;br /&gt;they will keep to themselves&lt;br /&gt;returning unconditional love unreservedly&lt;br /&gt;has no intention of gratifying people &lt;br /&gt;as she once did for friendship’s sake&lt;br /&gt;or to back down from things they’ve said&lt;br /&gt;in lessons learned that concern herself and others&lt;br /&gt;she’s becoming more astute&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;believes in a Saviour who walks&lt;br /&gt;with her through the day &lt;br /&gt;guards sleep as the moon slips&lt;br /&gt;across the dark sky &lt;br /&gt;He is radiance&lt;br /&gt;these beliefs keep her steady&lt;br /&gt;and she understands no matter what happens&lt;br /&gt;He’s always there so&lt;br /&gt;trust is intrinsic&lt;br /&gt;intimacy grows&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;she&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;plays with words as on a palette of paints&lt;br /&gt;creates pictures with them&lt;br /&gt;makes language into a shape she desires &lt;br /&gt;in her hands they have learned&lt;br /&gt;to become striking artwork &lt;br /&gt;an expressional exhibition&lt;br /&gt;which tells about harvests gathered&lt;br /&gt;showers nourished&lt;br /&gt;a life fully alive&lt;br /&gt;with each nimble movement&lt;br /&gt;her fingers make on keyboard&lt;br /&gt;or holding a pen&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-5316466811229260150?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/5316466811229260150/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/08/michelle-angelini-she-expressional.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/5316466811229260150'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/5316466811229260150'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/08/michelle-angelini-she-expressional.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-308714156286696504</id><published>2009-06-22T16:31:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-06-22T16:34:33.124-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Michelle Angelini&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BLINDSPOT&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In that moment &lt;br /&gt;when going from light&lt;br /&gt;to dark where&lt;br /&gt;no vision exists&lt;br /&gt;back into sun again&lt;br /&gt;when sight returns&lt;br /&gt;it’s too late&lt;br /&gt;for defensive moves&lt;br /&gt;to avoid the inevitable&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-308714156286696504?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/308714156286696504/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/06/michelle-angelini-blindspot-in-that.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/308714156286696504'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/308714156286696504'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/06/michelle-angelini-blindspot-in-that.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-6283513922415659525</id><published>2009-06-02T11:43:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-06-02T11:44:39.667-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>CaLokie&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;WAR DANCE &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1923&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mom was 12 when her father abandoned her mother&lt;br /&gt;three sisters and three brothers&lt;br /&gt;They moved to a town where some oil rich Osages lived&lt;br /&gt;in the best houses in town&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some Osage classmates were attracted to Mom’s red hair&lt;br /&gt;They laughed when she said she had some Cherokee blood&lt;br /&gt;But when some of them met her dark haired, brown eyed, dark&lt;br /&gt;complected mama they believed her&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They invited her to a pow wow on the nearby Osage reservation&lt;br /&gt;She was awed by ceremonial dancers in resplendent regalia&lt;br /&gt;Then white haired elder arose to speak&lt;br /&gt;He addressed assembly in native tongue &lt;br /&gt;interpreted in English&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He exhorted them&lt;br /&gt;to go back to the blanket for warmth&lt;br /&gt;to moccasins instead of boots and high heels&lt;br /&gt;to the horse instead of stinking, noisy cars&lt;br /&gt;He begged them not to take white mates in marriage&lt;br /&gt;but to wed each other and rear their children in Osage ways&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;After speech, war dance begins&lt;br /&gt;Some dancers brandish swords&lt;br /&gt;some wave tomahawks over heads&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mom was never so terrified&lt;br /&gt;She was relieved to walk away &lt;br /&gt;with red haired scalp intact&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1966&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;One year after the riots or rebellion&lt;br /&gt;depending on your point of view&lt;br /&gt;I attend the Watts Jazz festival&lt;br /&gt;In the afternoon under  the junk sculpted tower of Simon Rodia &lt;br /&gt;The drumbeat was like a flower power fiesta at a love-in&lt;br /&gt;and deep in my heart&lt;br /&gt;I do believe&lt;br /&gt;that one day &lt;br /&gt;WE&lt;br /&gt;black and white together&lt;br /&gt;SHALL OVERCOME&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But as Hugh Masekela trumpet fanfares &lt;br /&gt;West Coast sun down &lt;br /&gt;majority of minority European Americans&lt;br /&gt;leave festival &lt;br /&gt;I was left with a few whites lost in the immensity&lt;br /&gt;of an African night&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A Black Power beat takes over drums&lt;br /&gt;Flash backs to year ago unrest follow&lt;br /&gt;“BURN, BABY, BURN.”&lt;br /&gt;“GET WHITEY!”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Suddenly blonde Euro in bare midriff&lt;br /&gt;stands up in spotlight and shakes blue jean booty&lt;br /&gt;to roar and laughter of crowd&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A jazz brother needs ride&lt;br /&gt;and in my ’53 Chevy I drive him to his ghetto home&lt;br /&gt;My fading blue clunker could have broken down there&lt;br /&gt;but it didn’t&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And even if it did&lt;br /&gt;as Miles Davis might have “kind of blued” &lt;br /&gt;with muted horn&lt;br /&gt;“SO WHAT”&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-6283513922415659525?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/6283513922415659525/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/06/calokie-war-dance-1923-mom-was-12-when.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6283513922415659525'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6283513922415659525'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/06/calokie-war-dance-1923-mom-was-12-when.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4506167530388810124</id><published>2009-04-27T22:47:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-04-27T22:48:24.953-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Lori Wall-Holloway&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;CLEANSING IN THE NEW YEAR&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The rain slowly falls &lt;br /&gt;and lands on leaves of bushes &lt;br /&gt;outside my window.&lt;br /&gt;The gentle pattering sound &lt;br /&gt;before dawn is soft and sweet.&lt;br /&gt;It brings calmness to my heart.&lt;br /&gt;A new day has come in a new &lt;br /&gt;month and in a new year.&lt;br /&gt;I sense something wonderful &lt;br /&gt;is in the works as the old days&lt;br /&gt;and problems are now swept &lt;br /&gt;away with the water.&lt;br /&gt;A fresh joy bursts forth within&lt;br /&gt;me like a colorful butterfly,&lt;br /&gt;which breaks out from its cocoon.&lt;br /&gt;After the struggle, victory is the result.&lt;br /&gt;I listen as the rain cleanses and washes &lt;br /&gt;away the dirt and hardship &lt;br /&gt;from days and times before.&lt;br /&gt;It offers me a new start.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' 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Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-1824767893628053787</id><published>2009-04-07T17:46:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-04-07T17:48:15.730-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Barbara Cogswell&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SESTINA&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Many uses have been found for a length of rope-&lt;br /&gt;take the one hanging loose in the campanile&lt;br /&gt;it brings to life an object of brass&lt;br /&gt;what  metal sounds better for  a bell?&lt;br /&gt;The bell ringer hangs loose with his bong&lt;br /&gt;It’s what goes in it that rings his  chimes&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Now this ringer of chimes&lt;br /&gt;has no need for a rope&lt;br /&gt;or anything else but his bong&lt;br /&gt;while he hunkers down in the campanile&lt;br /&gt;the rest of us must wait to hear the bell&lt;br /&gt;it’s his job after all, to polish the brass&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;but he doesn’t remember to burnish the brass&lt;br /&gt;but composes a ballad, influenced by chimes&lt;br /&gt;just too much energy needed to ring the bell&lt;br /&gt;you’ve got to stand up and pull on the rope!&lt;br /&gt;it’s nice, but why is the ceiling so high, in this campanile?&lt;br /&gt;for something useful to do, he loads up his bong&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;he’ll sing the ballad  about his bong&lt;br /&gt;and make plans for polishing the brass&lt;br /&gt;he’ll spend the night in this warm campanile&lt;br /&gt;and hope he doesn’t run out of smoke for chimes&lt;br /&gt;he tried swinging from wall to wall on the rope&lt;br /&gt;inadvertently ringing the bell&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;which was nice, but he said  “to hell with the bell”&lt;br /&gt;and  the ballad turned sad, about his bong&lt;br /&gt;for it dropped and broke while swinging on the rope&lt;br /&gt;he’ll have to replace it, if he can come up with the brass&lt;br /&gt;to live happily ever after, he needs those chimes&lt;br /&gt;for these lonely hours in the campanile&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;this bell ringer earned his PHD  and left, no harm done to the campanile&lt;br /&gt;the sun reflects each day off the brilliant bell&lt;br /&gt;graffito on the wall reads “different times ring different chimes”&lt;br /&gt;of course nobody has forgotten “bong”&lt;br /&gt;which used to mean the sound induced by striking a bell made of brass&lt;br /&gt;by nothing more than pulling on a rope&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;so every campus has a campanile &lt;br /&gt;and hears at least one bong&lt;br /&gt;it is to be hoped, from a bell  &lt;br /&gt;made of polished  brass&lt;br /&gt;and somebody rings their chimes &lt;br /&gt;just swinging on the rope&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-1824767893628053787?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/1824767893628053787/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/04/barbara-cogswell-sestina-many-uses-have.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/1824767893628053787'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/1824767893628053787'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/04/barbara-cogswell-sestina-many-uses-have.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-8375748441202803090</id><published>2009-04-05T18:00:00.001-07:00</published><updated>2009-04-05T18:03:35.128-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Ed Houston&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;AMERICA&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;America for spacious skies, for amber waves of grain&lt;br /&gt;You stole me from another country, and now I bear your name&lt;br /&gt;America, America, between a rock and a hard place is where I be&lt;br /&gt;America, America, Home of the Brave, Land of the Free&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;America, America, Democrat or Republican is all the same to me&lt;br /&gt;Makes no difference who holds the whip, if your back is the only one they see&lt;br /&gt;America, America, remember when segregation was the law of the Land &lt;br /&gt;Of course it wasn’t right, but at least, Blacks had there own Economic Plan&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We couldn’t use yours, but we had our own banks, stores, theatres, and were always ready to give each other a helping hand.&lt;br /&gt;But through the process of integration, we own nothing as a people, and about each other we don’t give a damn&lt;br /&gt;America, America, you’ve really taught us well, in what’s really important in life, like Bling-Bling, and how to tap that ass&lt;br /&gt;And how to stay fresh, and dress to impress, drive the Escalade, and talk all day long about how much Kobe and LaBraun get paid&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;America, America, you’ve been a hard task master&lt;br /&gt;But truth be told there’s no place I’d rather be&lt;br /&gt;Every ethnic group in the world can come here and make it&lt;br /&gt;It’s no wonder they look down on me&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;America, America, you’ve held the carrot-stick of Freedom in front of our faces for over 200 years&lt;br /&gt;We’ve got a few nibbles, but never a full bite&lt;br /&gt;It’s our own fault if we keep being stupid believing you’ll be fair&lt;br /&gt;No group has earned freedom without being in a fight&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;America, America, death to you and yours is the cry from distance lands&lt;br /&gt;America, America, we will bury you, they say it’s Allah’s Plan&lt;br /&gt;But every group in the world has a Plan, and you best believe Black’s will be last on every list&lt;br /&gt;And if we don’t band together and get our own Plan, we’ve got no right to get pissed&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;America, America, like it or not, this is my country too&lt;br /&gt;And there’s no other place I’d rather be&lt;br /&gt;But if we don’t wake up Black America&lt;br /&gt;We’ll continue to be Slaves, just pretending to be Free&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-8375748441202803090?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/8375748441202803090/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/04/ed-houston-america-america-for-spacious.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8375748441202803090'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8375748441202803090'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/04/ed-houston-america-america-for-spacious.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-7890754086299064774</id><published>2009-03-30T22:56:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-03-30T22:57:30.277-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>CaLokie&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;EVOLUTION OF FUNDIES&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Six to ten thousand years ago began your earth&lt;br /&gt;From wiles of talking serpents you sounded alert  &lt;br /&gt;Shellfish eating sodomites guilty of double abomination &lt;br /&gt;Creator created in your image over all creation did give you domination&lt;br /&gt;For your professional piety you were promoted to priest in first theocracy&lt;br /&gt;We the prehistoric people were robbed of our communal democracy&lt;br /&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;In Athens you lost your subjects but not your slaves by democracy&lt;br /&gt;Ptolemy told how sun and stars revolved around your earth&lt;br /&gt;Under Rome you were a pharisee in a monotheistic theocracy &lt;br /&gt;From hexes and vexes of opposite sexes you gave alert&lt;br /&gt;You prayed for an apocalyptical messiah to restore your domination&lt;br /&gt;A woman caught in adultery but not her partner was an abomination &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You now loved lobster but homosexuality still an abomination &lt;br /&gt;You denounced debauchery of sex deviants in decadent Greek democracy&lt;br /&gt;In Medieval Europe you were given back your domination&lt;br /&gt;You fared sumptuously from labor of serfs who plowed your earth&lt;br /&gt;Against heliocentric heresy of godless Galileo you gave alert&lt;br /&gt;No light allowed in your Dark Ages theocracy &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You replaced European peasants with African slaves in New World theocracy&lt;br /&gt;Bourgeoisie building wealth from colony plunder and slave labor no abomination&lt;br /&gt;From bawdy bards and Robin Hood wealth re-distributers you sounded alert  &lt;br /&gt;We the people lost our commons under “enlightened” English democracy&lt;br /&gt;Missionaries and merchants you sent forth to colonize the earth&lt;br /&gt;You raged against papal, Muslim or ungodly despot domination&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But raved from Salem pulpits the glories of Puritan domination &lt;br /&gt;You waged war to keep slaves private property in Confederate theocracy&lt;br /&gt;You maximize profits from industries which rape Mother Earth&lt;br /&gt;Entrepreneurs who got filthy rich from sweatshop work no abomination &lt;br /&gt;There was a reign of Klan terror in your Jim Crow democracy&lt;br /&gt;Against welfare cheats driving Cadillacs you sound alert &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But against bourgeois attempts to loot social security you give no alert&lt;br /&gt;You have sold your soul for Mammon’s worldwide domination &lt;br /&gt;Evolution myth and global warming hoax in your home school theocracy&lt;br /&gt;Labor and gay unions voted our of your Bible Belt democracy&lt;br /&gt;Olympic gold medal winners who smoke pot an abomination&lt;br /&gt;Further right you swim to the edge of your flat earth &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We must alert the people to the perils of theocracy &lt;br /&gt;No, to fundy domination! No, to fundy abomination!&lt;br /&gt;Yes, to democracy for all people! Yes, to cure of Mother Earth!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-7890754086299064774?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/7890754086299064774/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/calokie-evolution-of-fundies-six-to-ten.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7890754086299064774'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7890754086299064774'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/calokie-evolution-of-fundies-six-to-ten.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-9041176906195209935</id><published>2009-03-19T09:53:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-03-19T09:54:56.445-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Mary Frances Spencer&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;IN THIS SPA &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;we are all ages &lt;br /&gt;bodies mapping time &lt;br /&gt;mixed colors ages &lt;br /&gt;grandma is here too &lt;br /&gt;dipping in pools &lt;br /&gt;lounging in salty steam &lt;br /&gt;breathing jade oxygen &lt;br /&gt;we find a moment &lt;br /&gt;to be free &lt;br /&gt;to shed the old &lt;br /&gt;skins &lt;br /&gt;today we &lt;br /&gt;are all &lt;br /&gt;naked &lt;br /&gt;and have never been more &lt;br /&gt;beautiful&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-9041176906195209935?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/9041176906195209935/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/mary-frances-spencer-in-this-spa-we-are.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/9041176906195209935'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/9041176906195209935'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/mary-frances-spencer-in-this-spa-we-are.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-8774603254338573614</id><published>2009-03-10T06:46:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-03-10T06:47:00.618-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Mary Frances Spencer&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;LIGHTENING SPRING&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;spiral down &lt;br /&gt;magnetic darkness&lt;br /&gt;intense negativity &lt;br /&gt;attracts more&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;hides under the heavy&lt;br /&gt;cloak fear&lt;br /&gt;dire predictions&lt;br /&gt;leaden footsteps&lt;br /&gt;to nowhere&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;when light annoys&lt;br /&gt;irritant spark&lt;br /&gt;provoke&lt;br /&gt;the hibernating &lt;br /&gt;come out and taste&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;lightening of this storm&lt;br /&gt;crack through clouds&lt;br /&gt;melt the frozen&lt;br /&gt;light a forgotten pyre&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;burn away bloated&lt;br /&gt;as soft ashes fall&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;flower petal spring&lt;br /&gt;must bloom&lt;br /&gt;again&lt;br /&gt;soon&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-8774603254338573614?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/8774603254338573614/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/mary-frances-spencer-lightening-spring.html#comment-form' title='3 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8774603254338573614'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8774603254338573614'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/mary-frances-spencer-lightening-spring.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>3</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-7490368399876824953</id><published>2009-03-09T21:02:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2009-03-09T21:04:04.235-07:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Ruth Nolan&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;COATLICUE&lt;br /&gt;the mother of gods&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;She’s not a mirage, cold at this altitude&lt;br /&gt;somewhere, talking, between snow slides and sand dunes&lt;br /&gt;coffee avalanche, a wired bird, wings sliding draftward&lt;br /&gt;to a daft cold escape. Desert or mountain,&lt;br /&gt;one can’t be certain, lopped windmill&lt;br /&gt;slapping time with too steep geography,&lt;br /&gt;north America’s sharpest drop and rise&lt;br /&gt;jump, fall, swoop upward, the venturi effect&lt;br /&gt;blockades the fog, clouds, mirrored water, snake gathering&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Date a cougar, engage in IM sex on AOL buddy systems.&lt;br /&gt;E-harmony.com matches up Christians and agnostics&lt;br /&gt;And pray you’ll catch a draft. MILF, alive and well,&lt;br /&gt;Stacy’s Mom, neighbors avoid rent and move overnight.&lt;br /&gt;We’ll fuck at your apartment between the hours of 1-4 pm&lt;br /&gt;somewhere in Topanga Canyon, the narrow passage&lt;br /&gt;between the hot valley and drop to cool Malibu.&lt;br /&gt;Plenty of fish shows a man with wild hair, gather them&lt;br /&gt;In between, where the sun falls and ascends. Summer heat &lt;br /&gt;behind the curtain, ready to descend, toxic shrew.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;It’s real, and too hot beneath a down blanket. The gate&lt;br /&gt;Is busted out again, the fridge is new on borrowed money,&lt;br /&gt;the washing machine spin cycle doesn’t wring enough&lt;br /&gt;water out, a young adult daughter steals your clothes.&lt;br /&gt;He wants you to meet at Horsethief Creek this&lt;br /&gt;time, an up and down 2.5 mile hike ending at water,&lt;br /&gt;cottonwoods or high pines, dry by summer, landing hard,&lt;br /&gt;full moon again, yanking up the dry lakebed, storied winds&lt;br /&gt;dying in childbirth, landscaping the southern stars.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-7490368399876824953?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/7490368399876824953/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/ruth-nolan-coatlicue-mother-of-gods.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7490368399876824953'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7490368399876824953'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/03/ruth-nolan-coatlicue-mother-of-gods.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-8169863656371286935</id><published>2009-02-23T19:22:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2009-02-25T11:26:08.996-08:00</updated><title type='text'>Three by Eleanor!</title><content type='html'>Eleanor Higgins&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;GHAZAL&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am a dirty little girl with flapping shoes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;You can wash your face &lt;br /&gt;but you'll need money &lt;br /&gt;to buy new sandals&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am poor, without status&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;They say with hard work &lt;br /&gt;you can be rich but few make it&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am dark, ugly, untouchable&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;Isn't beauty &lt;br /&gt;in the eye of the beholder?&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am scared I'll starve, disappear, be ignored&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;You are here&lt;br /&gt;even if no one looks at you&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But what if I the tree falls &lt;br /&gt;and I'm not there to hear it?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;We will imagine its sound together&lt;/em&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-8169863656371286935?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/8169863656371286935/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/eleanor-higgins-ghazal-i-am-dirty.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8169863656371286935'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/8169863656371286935'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/eleanor-higgins-ghazal-i-am-dirty.html' title='Three by Eleanor!'/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-8239144783127070836</id><published>2009-02-23T19:20:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-02-23T19:21:21.114-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Eleanor Higgins&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BAD BOYS&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;most of my boyfriends&lt;br /&gt;have been bad boys &lt;br /&gt;but this has had its advantages&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;they don't work &lt;br /&gt;so they have more time &lt;br /&gt;to spend with you&lt;br /&gt;or to make friends &lt;br /&gt;and their friends &lt;br /&gt;are often interesting &lt;br /&gt;"offbeat" characters&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;because they don't work &lt;br /&gt;you're probably supporting them &lt;br /&gt;yet because of this&lt;br /&gt;they won't boss you around&lt;br /&gt;or criticize&lt;br /&gt;or expect you to cook &lt;br /&gt;if you don't want to &lt;br /&gt;and they have time &lt;br /&gt;for morning sex&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;bad boys don't plan ahead&lt;br /&gt;are open to suggestion, &lt;br /&gt;don't have much of an agenda &lt;br /&gt;live in the moment&lt;br /&gt;if you have a date with a bad boy &lt;br /&gt;he'll ask you what you'd like to do&lt;br /&gt;…and mean it&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;they don't seem to experience fear &lt;br /&gt;like the rest of us &lt;br /&gt;but this can be a good thing &lt;br /&gt;they are often heroes&lt;br /&gt;the kind who run into burning buildings&lt;br /&gt;the only thing they are afraid of &lt;br /&gt;is getting caught!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;they are exceptional liars&lt;br /&gt;thus great at poker&lt;br /&gt;have absolutely no "tells" &lt;br /&gt;those mannerisms &lt;br /&gt;that give the rest of us away&lt;br /&gt;when we are lying&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;there's a saying in recovery circles &lt;br /&gt;"alcoholics want to run the bank&lt;br /&gt;and addicts want to rob it" &lt;br /&gt;make the appropriate substitutions,&lt;br /&gt;and you have another truism&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;they don't have &lt;br /&gt;much of a conscience&lt;br /&gt;so if you want something&lt;br /&gt;they'll steal it for you!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;for example, during the Olympics &lt;br /&gt;I mentioned I liked the colorful signs &lt;br /&gt;directing traffic to the events&lt;br /&gt;the next day, the sign pointing &lt;br /&gt;to the beach volleyball court &lt;br /&gt;showed up on my doorstep&lt;br /&gt;I was thrilled&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;they don't contend with &lt;br /&gt;Inconvenient feelings of remorse&lt;br /&gt;so suddenly &lt;br /&gt;no one owes you money anymore!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and a bad boyfriend can often do away &lt;br /&gt;with pesky disputes you may have &lt;br /&gt;and he won't feel bad about it &lt;br /&gt;for instance, the guys across the street &lt;br /&gt;used to park in my driveway &lt;br /&gt;but when my bad boyfriend moved in &lt;br /&gt;they stopped doing it!&lt;br /&gt;(come to think of it, &lt;br /&gt;I haven't seen their cars &lt;br /&gt;at all lately… hmmm.)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;another great example &lt;br /&gt;of how handy no conscience can be:&lt;br /&gt;The Story of the Barking Dogs&lt;br /&gt;we had two huskies behind us&lt;br /&gt;the neighbors and I had tried everything &lt;br /&gt;talking to the owner, &lt;br /&gt;calling animal control &lt;br /&gt;nothing worked&lt;br /&gt;it was so bad&lt;br /&gt;I couldn't go on that side of the house &lt;br /&gt;without starting them up!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;then one day, silence.  &lt;br /&gt;I asked one of the other neighbors &lt;br /&gt;what happened&lt;br /&gt;she told me one of the dogs &lt;br /&gt;had been poisoned &lt;br /&gt;and the owner moved out &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;that weekend we had a great party &lt;br /&gt;on the patio we could now use &lt;br /&gt;because the dogs were gone&lt;br /&gt;my bad boyfriend played &lt;br /&gt;a recent song he'd written &lt;br /&gt;which was a big hit&lt;br /&gt;it was called&lt;br /&gt;"Dead Puppy Blues"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yes, bad boys are great,&lt;br /&gt;but the best thing about bad boys is &lt;br /&gt;you don't have to be good around them.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-8239144783127070836?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' 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src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4763646803952934579</id><published>2009-02-23T19:19:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2009-02-25T14:21:57.019-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Eleanor Higgins&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I AM SCENERY&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a prop in your life&lt;br /&gt;the unplugged telephone&lt;br /&gt;with no one there&lt;br /&gt;with whom you have &lt;br /&gt;your one-sided &lt;br /&gt;play-acted&lt;br /&gt;conversation&lt;br /&gt;you conjure up fake tears&lt;br /&gt;for my imaginary wrongs&lt;br /&gt;then disappear me &lt;br /&gt;in Act Three&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; if I were real &lt;br /&gt;I could march off your stage&lt;br /&gt;punctuate my exit &lt;br /&gt;with a slap to your face&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I'd incite my prop friends: &lt;br /&gt; the imitation pine tree&lt;br /&gt; the minature frozen lake&lt;br /&gt; painted on&lt;br /&gt; the breakaway window&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;we're sick of the sound &lt;br /&gt;of your studied dialect&lt;br /&gt;when your back is turned&lt;br /&gt;we'll move to another soundstage&lt;br /&gt;you'll pick up a phone made of air&lt;br /&gt;stare at a blank wall&lt;br /&gt;read lines about an evergreen &lt;br /&gt;that isn't there!  HA!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;revenge is sweetest&lt;br /&gt;in its imagining&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-4763646803952934579?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/4763646803952934579/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/eleanor-higgins-i-am-scenery-prop-in.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4763646803952934579'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4763646803952934579'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/eleanor-higgins-i-am-scenery-prop-in.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-6872584140320607788</id><published>2009-02-22T19:19:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-02-22T19:21:24.507-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Michelle Angelini&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Hearts on her back jeans pockets&lt;br /&gt;say something&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;I’m loved&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;She’s an uptown queen&lt;br /&gt;striding along Hollywood Boulevard&lt;br /&gt;as if she knows all those&lt;br /&gt;in front of her will bow down&lt;br /&gt;in worship&lt;br /&gt;No questions asked&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Scrunched beneath a blanket&lt;br /&gt;on the bench serving for a bed&lt;br /&gt;on Alvarado Street&lt;br /&gt;he’s unidentifiable&lt;br /&gt;Only his pants and shoes&lt;br /&gt;below the dirty blanket&lt;br /&gt;give knowledge of gender&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;I’m invisible, please recognize me&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He bows down before the twin masters&lt;br /&gt;of poverty and homelessness&lt;br /&gt;Too many questions&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;And, I, somewhere in the middle&lt;br /&gt;escape homelessness each month&lt;br /&gt;My stature when I walk says&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;I’m generally happy with life&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sheets cover the bed on which I sleep&lt;br /&gt;just as my clothes are no strangers&lt;br /&gt;to a washer and dryer&lt;br /&gt;I am equal to both queen and homeless man&lt;br /&gt;neither bowing before nor slumping beneath&lt;br /&gt;I question everything – learning to live&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-6872584140320607788?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/6872584140320607788/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/michelle-angelini-somewhere-in-middle.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6872584140320607788'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6872584140320607788'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/michelle-angelini-somewhere-in-middle.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-6465408733175663299</id><published>2009-02-02T03:06:00.001-08:00</published><updated>2009-02-02T03:09:34.145-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Helen Graziano&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;FEAR NO ART&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Wandered into a New Jerusalem, a secular Vatican&lt;br /&gt;A quasi sacred ground complete with Chardonnay&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;CCAA planted its foot in dusty earth of Etiwanda&lt;br /&gt;Wrote the name Contemporary Art on winery walls&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Pilgrims from banks, farmers from fields&lt;br /&gt;Teachers from schools find the answer, look for truth&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Satisfy artistic search amid arid land of TV&lt;br /&gt;Malls, billboards, telephone poles, distressed homes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Drink in rainbow colors eternal cubism, realism&lt;br /&gt;Of Andree's geometry, Fauvism of Bob Smith's trees&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Art, an organizing experience avoiding boredom&lt;br /&gt;Teases senses, not to do the same thing over and over&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We are immune to reason, need only food, water&lt;br /&gt;Sleep, sex, open arms of art gallery, colored shapes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;No Pope, priest, prelate, just disciples of Cezanne, Kandinsky&lt;br /&gt;Gauguin, diamonds sparkling, trees blazing orange&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The eye sees prisms not prisons, kaleidoscopic broken&lt;br /&gt;Images of suns spots, flowers, pristine sky&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I, a poor beggar poet, selling verses in the market place&lt;br /&gt;A slum dog luring travelers to Taj Mahal, bazaar of color&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Climb the chakra ladder, create my own stars&lt;br /&gt;Midst action of creation, debauchery and energy&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Smith's California Dreaming sane with Chevy's&lt;br /&gt;Historical rendition of As Time Goes By&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;It Had To Be You, driving the Chevy, top down, past&lt;br /&gt;California orange trees on Rte.66, citrus labels upscaled&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Bob's agency, technical perfection, imaginary, red sky&lt;br /&gt;In dream of flying, Andre turns inward, communing&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;With acrylics, backwards being babe in Waikiki&lt;br /&gt;Bob renders Laguna seascapes, male/female polarity&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Together sets horizon high, lines into infinity&lt;br /&gt;Surrealism, Expressionist Mahoney Smith&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Survival of the finest, only God can really&lt;br /&gt;Judge beauty, be it mountain, sea, cathedral&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The moving fingers paint and write and&lt;br /&gt;Having writ move on, as long as lovers woo&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-6465408733175663299?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/6465408733175663299/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/helen-graziano-fear-no-art-wandered.html#comment-form' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6465408733175663299'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/6465408733175663299'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/02/helen-graziano-fear-no-art-wandered.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-7901242290602985695</id><published>2009-01-31T12:50:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-01-31T12:55:27.248-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Steven R. Kutcher&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ALTADENA BALLERINA&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Pink twirls and pirouette pearls&lt;br /&gt;Tutus turn while arms unfurl&lt;br /&gt;Satin shoes flying while bodies whirl&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The red velvet curtain falls and rises&lt;br /&gt;To the sound of folk music surprises&lt;br /&gt;The audience anticipate dancers of all sizes&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But the 9 year old 's feet are in a pickle&lt;br /&gt;Her body is a statue, a frozen popsicle&lt;br /&gt;Stuck like pine pitch on each golden curl&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Her young face frightened, completely hidden&lt;br /&gt;She starts to dart behind curtains unrisen&lt;br /&gt;“I cannot dance,” are words quietly spoken&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Then a soft voice appeared in her youthful head&lt;br /&gt;This is what her ballet teacher pridefully said,&lt;br /&gt;“You are an Altadena ballerina,&lt;br /&gt;Fly from your cage like a bird instead”&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;With a burst of energy rarely engaged,&lt;br /&gt;She floated and twirled across mid-stage&lt;br /&gt;Dancing like a bird just out of its cage&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The audiences shouted with magnanimous glee&lt;br /&gt;Bouquets of roses were tossed, one, two, three&lt;br /&gt;She danced like a faun and jumped so merrily&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But the very best happened&lt;br /&gt;When all the dancing was done,&lt;br /&gt;When the crowds left the theater,&lt;br /&gt;When the orchestra had unstrung,&lt;br /&gt;When the ballerina had danced her best&lt;br /&gt;And had so much fun&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There appeared on a silver platter,&lt;br /&gt;For everyone to see&lt;br /&gt;A golden ballerina award, a glass of milk&lt;br /&gt;And, of course, pink cookies, three&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-7901242290602985695?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/7901242290602985695/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/steven-r.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7901242290602985695'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/7901242290602985695'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/steven-r.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-2032119383020420761</id><published>2009-01-25T12:53:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-01-25T18:33:00.511-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Don Kingfisher Campbell&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;JOSHUA TREE SERVICE&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;sun in the sky&lt;br /&gt;filtered through bands&lt;br /&gt;of blue and white&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;land all a round&lt;br /&gt;mountains frame (surround)&lt;br /&gt;rock strewn plain&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;worshippers gather&lt;br /&gt;citizens of earth&lt;br /&gt;stand with branches&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;outstretched take&lt;br /&gt;in periodic warmth&lt;br /&gt;between collected tears&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;even rocks seem&lt;br /&gt;to enjoy the hours&lt;br /&gt;of light reflection&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;(effortlessly provide&lt;br /&gt;shadows for respite&lt;br /&gt;from constant brilliance)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;through the unseen&lt;br /&gt;companion who fills&lt;br /&gt;space around us&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;we grow up and die&lt;br /&gt;reseed the soil keep&lt;br /&gt;the ceremony going&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-2032119383020420761?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/2032119383020420761/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/don-kingfisher-campbell-joshua-tree.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/2032119383020420761'/><link rel='self' 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glistened&lt;br /&gt;in the sun, and every spring&lt;br /&gt;they would dance the “waggle”&lt;br /&gt;to the sound of their buzzing&lt;br /&gt;wings, the “round” , and&lt;br /&gt;the “tremble” too, tell each&lt;br /&gt;other where the sweetest&lt;br /&gt;nectar could be sipped&lt;br /&gt;when the pollen was best&lt;br /&gt;peach blossoms, cherry or&lt;br /&gt;pear, a carpet of&lt;br /&gt;clover. &lt;br /&gt;only the Queen&lt;br /&gt;(she had no crown)&lt;br /&gt;laid the eggs ate nothing&lt;br /&gt;but royal jelly &lt;br /&gt;the rest worked all their short&lt;br /&gt;lives, feeding the babies&lt;br /&gt;(in the larval stage) bee bread&lt;br /&gt;and honey till they emerged&lt;br /&gt;from their octagonal tubes&lt;br /&gt;full grown, flew off to pollinate&lt;br /&gt;another season.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Where are they now, you say?&lt;br /&gt;Good question!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-5034887641662308546?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/5034887641662308546/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/barbara-cogswell-listen-kids-there-once.html#comment-form' title='5 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/5034887641662308546'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/5034887641662308546'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/barbara-cogswell-listen-kids-there-once.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>5</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4777612866176131288</id><published>2009-01-13T15:54:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-01-13T15:55:08.688-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Terry McCarty&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I WISH I COULD BE THE OSTRICH ON TAMPA AVENUE&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Once or twice a week I drive past&lt;br /&gt;the petting zoo on Tampa in Northridge&lt;br /&gt;and I see the large bird&lt;br /&gt;not being angry&lt;br /&gt;not putting his head in the sand&lt;br /&gt;but staying still&lt;br /&gt;and looking over the fence&lt;br /&gt;at parents and children,&lt;br /&gt;proud of his role&lt;br /&gt;at being one of the first non dog/cat&lt;br /&gt;creatures a young child will see.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sometimes, I can see the ostrich’s face&lt;br /&gt;and he reminds me of the cartoon version&lt;br /&gt;with the cute eyes and savior-faire&lt;br /&gt;in Disney’s FANTASIA.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;When I feel too much bitterness and discontent,&lt;br /&gt;I think of the ostrich&lt;br /&gt;and how he could merely look for a hole in the ground—&lt;br /&gt;but instead greets the children-in-strollers and their parents,&lt;br /&gt;happy that he’s found a place and a calling in this world.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-4777612866176131288?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/4777612866176131288/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/terry-mccarty-i-wish-i-could-be-ostrich.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4777612866176131288'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4777612866176131288'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/terry-mccarty-i-wish-i-could-be-ostrich.html' title=''/><author><name>Don Kingfisher Campbell</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/03563466200910098213</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='22' height='32' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-rGZAbNH_k58/TkyitZQfpTI/AAAAAAAACJM/Sjm5qLw0U7Y/s220/DKC%2B8-1-11%2B4b.JPG'/></author><thr:total>2</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1145300535589204395.post-4687772805170105394</id><published>2009-01-09T08:54:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2009-01-13T15:56:04.529-08:00</updated><title type='text'></title><content type='html'>Sharmagne Leland-St.John&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;HAIKU RULES&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Someone&lt;br /&gt;Foolishly decreed&lt;br /&gt;And then some other one&lt;br /&gt;Complacently agreed&lt;br /&gt;With a gesture, oh so grand&lt;br /&gt;And a sweep of&lt;br /&gt;His dismissive hand&lt;br /&gt;The word ”&lt;em&gt;cicada&lt;/em&gt;”&lt;br /&gt;Should be&lt;br /&gt;Forever banned&lt;br /&gt;From modern Haiku&lt;br /&gt;And poetry.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sirs, I ever so strongly&lt;br /&gt;Disagree with you.&lt;br /&gt;3 &amp;amp; 4 syllable words&lt;br /&gt;Like “&lt;em&gt;cicada&lt;/em&gt;”&lt;br /&gt;And “&lt;em&gt;stacatto&lt;/em&gt;”&lt;br /&gt;And “&lt;em&gt;chrysanthemum&lt;/em&gt;”&lt;br /&gt;Should be sprinkled&lt;br /&gt;Liberally&lt;br /&gt;Like wild flower seeds&lt;br /&gt;Wherever and whenever&lt;br /&gt;The poets please!&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-4687772805170105394?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/feeds/4687772805170105394/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://deepcritique.blogspot.com/2009/01/poem-by-sharmagne-leland-stjohn.html#comment-form' title='2 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/1145300535589204395/posts/default/4687772805170105394'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' 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like to see the sky turn dark&lt;br /&gt;and feel cold air on my skin&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I walk inside, close the drapes&lt;br /&gt;sit on a sofa, switch on the&lt;br /&gt;fireplace--I mean--TV&lt;br /&gt;hunker down for the night&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;drift to drowse like a cloud&lt;br /&gt;smell a small fart escape&lt;br /&gt;lids fall like a night sky&lt;br /&gt;I feel light as a sofa cushion&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;but there is a fireplace inside me&lt;br /&gt;which is more like a TV really&lt;br /&gt;changing dreams all night long&lt;br /&gt;of clouds drifting over wet grass&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;and more skies with people below them&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/1145300535589204395-1327197688545647818?l=deepcritique.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' 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